Excellent job of building up to each component of a pass. I know a lot of new youth coaches really ask for this very basic knowledge that many of us take for granted.
I would suggest that after the game instead of pointing out the kids that made mistakes that you point out the kids that did the passing skills correctly, and what they specifically did correctly. Reward the positive and ignore the negative, at least for this age group.
Great job offering up all these videos.
enjoy,sam